Developing wit

Developing wit

As I’ve written, the advantage that human writers have over AI is wit. Ergo, if you want to continue to make a career of writing, you must develop your wit. Is that even possible? Yes. I’ll explain. What is wit? Wit is the ability, not just to inform, but to delight readers with your writing….

Oldsmar Air Conditioning

Oldsmar Air Conditioning

Today I analyze a piece of promotional writing from a small business. Here’s the new copy for the home page of Oldsmar Air Conditioning of Oldsmar, Florida. The same copy appears on the company’s Facebook page. Oldsmar AC is no longer in business, Thank You for your support over the last 10 years. Unfortunately, Eric…

Monty Python’s argument clinic: how “funny” demands unexpected shifts in perspective that machines will never master

Monty Python’s argument clinic: how “funny” demands unexpected shifts in perspective that machines will never master

I admit it: I’m obsessed with why ChatGPT and other AI services can’t be funny. I’m convinced the answer is that true humor demands an unexpected shift in perspective, and AI machines, trained to mimic patterns in what they’ve read, have problems with both “unexpected” and “shift in perspective.” Monty Python is the master of…

Funny machines

Funny machines

I’m obsessed with the question of whether machines can ever be funny. I’ve already shared how ChatGPT just “doesn’t get it” about what a joke is. It seems to understand the structure of a joke, but never quite gets what makes jokes funny. (The last of these ChatGPT jokes is so stupid that is a…

Can you have fun with a GDPR announcement? JibJab did

Can you have fun with a GDPR announcement? JibJab did

Your mailbox is full of GDPR announcements. They’re obligatory, and you’re almost certainly ignoring them. Writing in this context is a challenge — but humor and video site jibjab.com decided to have a little fun with it. On the policy side, though, it’s still legalese all the way down. Here’s the email my friend got…

KFC answers the question: when are you allowed to be funny in a crisis?

KFC answers the question: when are you allowed to be funny in a crisis?

KFC ran out of chicken in the UK. They had to close their restaurants, and then explain themselves. They decided to poke fun at themselves . . . which is great, so long as nobody gets hurt. KFC suffered a distribution problem, which meant, basically, no chicken. Their first decision — to close the restaurants…

Public speaking: navigation, humor, insight, information, advice, and stories

Public speaking: navigation, humor, insight, information, advice, and stories

As an author, I get called on to do speeches from time to time. My Writing Without Bullshit speech is now connecting pretty well, based on how audiences are reacting to it. The reason is that, like my writing, it’s tight: every slide has a purpose, and most of those purposes have a payload. It…