Don’t blurb yourself like Mike Pompeo. You’ll look like an idiot.

Don’t blurb yourself like Mike Pompeo. You’ll look like an idiot.

There are two good ways to get people to believe in your book. First, show them all the good things in the book. Publish excerpts. Write bylined articles. Preview the content. Second, have other people tell the world how good the book is. Collect blurb quotes from prominent people. Get people to write reviews on…

Secretary of State Mike Pompeo and the war against improper commas

Secretary of State Mike Pompeo and the war against improper commas

According to CNN, Mike Pompeo wants all State Department staff to stop using commas improperly. This obviously warrants all of our attention. The article, snarkily titled “Pompeo cracks down, on improper use, of commas at State Department,” reveals that Pompeo is an admirer of the Chicago Manual of Style and the Oxford Comma, also known…

CIA director-designate Mike Pompeo uses passive voice to justify a power grab
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CIA director-designate Mike Pompeo uses passive voice to justify a power grab

Passive voice in opinion pieces is pernicious: it hides who actually is supposed to do stuff. Donald Trump’s choice for CIA director, Mike Pompeo, repeatedly used this technique in a Wall Street Journal op-ed. When you’re advocating surveillance and data collection, we want to know who’s doing it — but Pompeo uses passive misdirection to focus on terrorists…